I swear Create Space is like ka-CHOW with printing and shipping. I even ordered economy shipping and wasn’t expecting the 10-9 proof till September 13th. Still it shipped Friday and arrived in the 11AM mail Monday. Hot damn!
While quite lovely, this is only my own personal copy for review and to experience ‘as a reader’ before I make the submission rounds. I’m already to Chapter Four and in Chapter One which is only two pages I spotted copy editing flubs. D: Like where I had combined sentences and kind of neglected to actually redraft the sentence. Or I did and I just totally had blinders on. I have no idea what my excuse is but there is no reason for and to appear four times in a sentence. D:
Other than that… It’s a little dandy of a book. I’m already having people ask me if the cover is the final version. XD I had to explain to them that depending on the company that picks it up there will likely be half-naked embracing dudes on the cover. *laughs* Out of the companies I’m looking at, if I get in with one of my top choices I’m really looking forward to their staff cover artists. My top picks have some amazing ones in their employ that I know could do John and Ahimsa justice. :3
Now back to reading. And lamenting the use of however in the final draft.
(Pro Tip: Never ever use ‘however’ in a story. It’s a sign of laziness. It just means ‘nonetheless’ and is a fairly useless word.)





